[Mike McCarty]

Patricia,

I know something about nitpicking and I would suggest that big toothed paper does not lend itself to this activity.

Many years ago I showed one of my paintings to an old artist, he looked it over and suggested that it had "died of borning." What I took from that was that it's birth, and it's death, had occured simultaneously. An interesting observation that I will never forget.

I like what you have started above. As to the plaid shirt, I don't think I would go all that much further with it.