Thanks.
Steven, I think I will trust your evaluation more than the reference!
This picture was mailed to me, and it was taken outside with sunlight hitting her left side, and I assume frontal flash. I noticed the catchlights as soon as Mary mentioned it. The value under the nose was caused when I reworked it after the model had mentioned her nose not being rounded enough, and I did not in return correct the value. I also believe I overworked it, not letting enough paper do its part.
Thank you for all the suggestions also, will keep them in mind when I rework this before posting it on my website. Your time is very appreciated.