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Old 11-24-2003, 12:38 PM   #3
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Hi Chuck.

Nice drawing. As Steven mentioned you have done a good job on placement of the facial features and I would also like to add that the model pose is very appealing also.

One area that stands out to me as needing some adjustment is the necklace. The dark outline of the necklace against that very light area is distracting from the focal point, that being the facial features. Maybe you could draw the necklace so that it appears "sketchy" or loose it all together.

Nice work!
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