03-09-2002, 09:47 PM
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FT Pro, Mem SOG,'08 Cert Excellence PSA, '02 Schroeder Portrait Award Copley Soc, '99 1st Place PSA, '98 Sp Recognition Washington Soc Portrait Artists, '97 1st Prize ASOPA, '97 Best Prtfolio ASOPA
Joined: Jun 2001
Location: Peterborough, NH
Posts: 1,114
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You have done a lot of things right, good lighting and composition, the skin shadows are just right (most people get 'em too dark), and that blouse is wonderful.
Here is my suggestion. The area at the bottom of the canvas doesn't explain itself. I'd simply like to see it more "finished" looking, i.e., bring the blouse all the way to the lower edge of the canvas.
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