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Kim,
I think you've done a good job on her face and hair. The background to me seems to create too much interest with to much intensity.
My main complaint would be in the area of edges. I think the edges could stand to be softened, particularly where her skin meets the fabric.
I think if you look closely at your reference you will be able to make that hand serve. Reducing the sharp edges will help the hand as well.
Seems like you're pretty well set on the bold belly. It's interesting to me (and I haven't gone back to check every post) that the belly seems to be going pro female con male. That seems interesting to me.
I was going to repost my covered belly version mostly for aggravation, but decided against it. I think I'm growing as a person.
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Mike McCarty
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