Jean, she's looking a little younger now but her right cheek (on our left) isn't as full below the level of the mouth as you have it, and her jawline, especially on her left (our right) is too low and full for a child her age. Also her right eyebrow (on our left) is too high relative to the position of the eye, and bringing it down would give her a more young-child-like forehead. Her left eyebrow is also a bit high but not as much. I think if you made those changes she'd look more her age. She's got a darling face and I like the painterly way you're approaching her.
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