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Old 05-06-2003, 09:00 AM   #6
Sharon Knettell Sharon Knettell is offline
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The Mouth

Mike,

It certainly is a lovely painting and I can't find much to critique. However the right lower lip is a problem for me, the shape and the value of the light seems too big and a tad too light. Squint at your resource and your painting side by side to see if there is a discrepancy. The mouth is always a problem area for me and sometimes it takes me days to get it right.

Sincerely,
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