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Old 05-06-2003, 12:19 AM   #5
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Leslie,

Thanks for your feedback. I think I will change the colour of the tie to either blue or red. His natutal skintone is a bit pale, and I had a hard time getting it right, but am glad that Steven thinks it looks right. And yes, I think he is handsome too. I hope I have captured his smiley eyes with the square shoulders and proud posture

Steven,

Thanks for the popcorn and soft drink special! I am so honoured that you have taken time to post such thoughtful and detailed feedback. And I am flattered with the compliment!

I agree with what you have pointed out, especially with the jacket's torso and his left shoulder. I can see what you mean about the face too.

I am so glad that I posted this for critique because I was tearing my hair out, not seeing what is wrong with it but I 'know' , something is bothering me. I am going to implement all the suggestions from you both tomorrow and hopefully the painting will look better then.

I will keep you all posted!

Sincerely,
Mai
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