Leslie,
Thanks for your feedback. I think I will change the colour of the tie to either blue or red. His natutal skintone is a bit pale, and I had a hard time getting it right, but am glad that Steven thinks it looks right. And yes, I think he is handsome too. I hope I have captured his smiley eyes with the square shoulders and proud posture
Steven,
Thanks for the popcorn and soft drink special! I am so honoured that you have taken time to post such thoughtful and detailed feedback. And I am flattered with the compliment!
I agree with what you have pointed out, especially with the jacket's torso and his left shoulder. I can see what you mean about the face too.
I am so glad that I posted this for critique because I was tearing my hair out, not seeing what is wrong with it but I 'know' , something is bothering me. I am going to implement all the suggestions from you both tomorrow and hopefully the painting will look better then.
I will keep you all posted!
Sincerely,
Mai