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Work-in-progress
Hello Everyone,
As promised, here is my work-in-progress. It is about half done. Nothing in the painting is at its final stage yet. I still have to finish the dress, put detailed designs on the cushions, background curtain, reflected lights, accents and highlights at the very end. My edges still need to be softened up also.
I would like to have some feedback for the following areas:
1. Something about the girl's face is bothering me. I think it is her left eye. Is her eye white too light? Or, is it something else that is wrong. I cannot figure it out, but I know something is not looking quite right.
2. My value pattern. How is it looking. The bottom part of the dress is hardly done, but I would like to know if my value pattern is effective.
3. Light and shadow pattern on the dress. Does it look effective?
As mentioned, I still have a lot to finish this painting. The hat will be toned down also, so it won't be as white.
If anyone sees anything else that needs improving, please let me know. I appreciate all feedback!
Sincerely,
Mai
Here is the full painting in progress:
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