Beth, was it the mom or the daughter who died?
I think the mom looks a bit sad, or even a bit disapproving at this stage, which could be a bit of a concern for the family. It is difficult to do something like this but it will be very much appreciated over time. Perhaps you could make it all a little blurrier or softer to create some dialogue between them.
Now, don't go and brush it all off like Jean did when I commented. I'm just being helpful
