[Chris Saper]

Dear Leopoldo,

I have very little to add to the very thoughtful critiques already posted, except for a compositional point... I try not to cut off hands at the edge of the canvas...I think by extending the length of the canvas or altering the position of your subject, you could complete the white gloves, (softer edge control, with some settled negative space underneath them) in order to return the viewer's eye to the focal point of the painting.

Very nice job! Your son should be thrilled.

Kindest regards,
Chris