Hi everybody!
After a few alterations I am now pretty much finished. I will probably not change it any more unless some of you sees something that should be changed.
Lon, I think you are totally right about forcing yourself to see what is important through quick live studies. I will start a thread in the "open studio" section where I will post a few portraits/sketches/drawings of a girl named Helena. I would love your input there too.
Here is the whole piece: