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Much better. Watch out that you don't put too many light values in the areas that are in shadow (like Dad's cheek on our left). It may be lighter than the rest of that shadow area but it's still darker than anything on the lit side of his face. Same thing with some too-light areas on the boy's forehead.
Also, be sure to soften the left edge of the dog's fur so it blends better into its surroundings.
Nice going.
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