I agree with Peter. You might want to concentrate on head and shoulders portraits for a while and perfect that. This face is very sweet, but the form lacks volume and more care could be paid to the shapes and rendering the way the light falls on the forms and features.
Study the head and shoulders portraits of artists on this site whose work you like. Then, down the road, work on three-quarter poses like this one. After you've perfected that, tackle elaborate backgrounds.
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