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Very nice progress. The hair and chair are greatly improved.
I would take another look at the direction the eye on our right is pointing. If anything it looks as if it's turning in even more than before.
On the dress, I would suggest you try to find something appropriate that she can wear that you can paint while really looking at it. The vagueness I see in the treatment of the dress probably reflects the fact that you didn't have something right in front of you to see how the folds and reflections would go.
Also the shawl over the right shoulder is so close in color to the rest of what she's wearing that it looks like it's part of her dress, but not drawn quite right. I had to check your earlier postings to see that it was a separate piece of cloth.
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