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Old 01-20-2003, 06:59 PM   #4
Peter Jochems Peter Jochems is offline
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I like the structures in the composition. One suggestion from me would be to not make the face too light. The white clothing (in relation to the face which is somewhat darker) under her face could give a beautiful tonal structure to the painting.

Peter
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