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I like this very much. Very accomplished painting in my opinion.
I have two very nit picking comments both for the girl on our right. As her bangs come down her forehead to their end on our left (and to a lesser extent on our right) there seems to be a dark line running along the bottom edge of her hair. This might look a little better if you took your flesh color and ran it up through that dark line to show some seperation.
Secondly, on the top middle of her lip on the right, this seems to be drawn a little too sharply. I would soften it a bit.
Great painting. Do I recognize the girl on our left from a previous post?
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