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Jeff,
I don't have much to add to the above excellent observations.
I would like to encourage you to leave the lower half of the drawing pretty much the way it is. The whole piece has the feel of a drawing, not-over-rendered. I like the sense of a range of finish-sketch in drawings - personal preference perhaps, but I think it is working very well for you here.
Best wishes,
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