Portrait Artist Forum - View Single Post

Chris Saper · 01-15-2002, 10:32 PM

Dear Jonathan,

Thanks for posting this lovely drawing. It looks to me that you have done an excellent job of transitioning light into shadow, and have some very subtle edges going on, especially the hairline and silhouette areas.

There is little I could suggest as an improvement, except perhaps to differentiate the light and shadow on the shirt and beads in the same way you have on the head.

Share more of your work!

Chris

I agree with Steven's observation on the chin position, very astute.

01-15-2002, 10:32 PM	#5
Chris Saper SENIOR MODERATOR SOG Member FT Professional, Author '03 Finalist, PSofATL '02 Finalist, PSofATL '02 1st Place, WCSPA '01 Honors, WCSPA Featured in Artists Mag. Joined: Jun 2001 Location: Arizona Posts: 2,481	Dear Jonathan, Thanks for posting this lovely drawing. It looks to me that you have done an excellent job of transitioning light into shadow, and have some very subtle edges going on, especially the hairline and silhouette areas. There is little I could suggest as an improvement, except perhaps to differentiate the light and shadow on the shirt and beads in the same way you have on the head. Share more of your work! Chris I agree with Steven's observation on the chin position, very astute. __________________ www.ChrisSaper.com