[Mike McCarty]

Clive,

I'll give you my dos pesos. I think the lady is a little hard to find in the composition for two reasons: first, the chair is very imposing and second, the broad scope of the composition.

I know these things can be to taste, but my taste goes for something like the following version. I've de-emphasized the arch of the chair arm on our right and darkened the chair on our left.

Once again this is just one guy's look.