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Old 11-19-2002, 01:13 PM   #13
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Jeanine,

Nice job on this painting. I agree with Mari about the hair, it seems well done to me at this point. I might try and create some slight seperation (thin shadowed area) between the blouse strap and the skin as it comes from the top of the shoulder on our right (on both sides of this strap). You might also create a slight elevation of the blouse strap from the surface of the shoulder. It appears the the strap is paper thin, which seems inconsistent with the rich texture that you have created elsewhere. Best of luck.
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