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Hello Leslie,
A few observations:
You seem to draw her pupils as complete round forms, while parts of the pupils aren't visible in the source-photograph. The left (for us left) pupil is a bit closer to the nose in the photograph. The left corner of the mouth (for us left) is placed a bit too much to the left. The nose is too small in the underpainting, (like Enzie already said) and should be placed a little higher to match the photograph. The chin is too sharp.
Hope this helps.
Greetings,
Peter
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